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The Magic of Feedback: Encouraging Constructive Critique in Young Writers
by: Priyanka Raha ~11/23/2023

An insight into the importance of feedback and how parents and peers can provide constructive critique that boosts confidence as well as improves skills.


Have you ever witnessed the transformation of a blank page into a masterpiece? The way words dance across the paper, creating stories, ideas, and dreams? Writing is a magical process that allows young minds to express themselves and explore the depths of their imagination. But what happens when these young writers face the daunting task of receiving feedback? How can we encourage them to embrace constructive critique and foster a growth mindset? In this article, we will delve into the magic of feedback and explore strategies to empower young writers on their journey of learning and growth.

Create a Safe and Supportive Environment

Feedback is a powerful tool that can shape and mold young writers into confident and skilled communicators. It provides them with valuable insights and perspectives that they might have overlooked. However, the key lies in creating an environment where feedback is seen as a gift rather than a criticism. For young students learning to write, the identification of mistakes plays a pivotal role. However, the manner in which these errors are communicated is equally important. When pointing out mistakes, it's crucial to do so with kindness and understanding, framing them as opportunities for learning and growth rather than as failures.
By fostering a growth mindset, we can help young writers understand that feedback is an opportunity for improvement and not a reflection of their worth as individuals. Under no circumstance, one should compare one student with another. It is beneficial for the students to understand that the most meaningful comparison they can make is with their own progress — how they have improved and grown from where they were yesterday. By making constructive criticism a regular occurrence and a tool for growth rather than a form of judgment, young writers can learn to view feedback as a positive and helpful resource.

Emphasis on the Process and Not the Outcome


One effective strategy to encourage constructive critique is to emphasize the process rather than the outcome. When young writers focus on the journey of writing, they become more open to receiving feedback and view it as a stepping stone towards growth. Encourage them to celebrate their efforts, explore different writing techniques, and embrace the learning process. By shifting the focus from perfection to progress, we can create a safe space for young writers to experiment, make mistakes, and learn from them.

By emphasizing the process, constructive feedback celebrates the efforts, strategies, and thought patterns that go into writing, encouraging young writers to develop and refine their skills over time. It shifts the focus from the end result — which can often be intimidating or discouraging if it doesn't meet expectations — to the incremental steps taken to improve. This method nurtures a growth mindset, where the evolving nature of learning and improvement is valued more than a static measure of success. In doing so, constructive feedback becomes a guiding force, helping writers to understand and appreciate the nuances of their writing journey, fostering resilience and a deeper engagement with the craft.

Make the Process of Feedback Actionable

Another way to foster a growth mindset is by providing feedback that is actionable. It’s essential to identify mistakes that students make and equally important to provide them with the next steps to make changes so they can improve. Merely telling a student that, “you made a mistake here” is unhelpful. It's essential to provide clear, specific, and manageable suggestions that they can readily apply to their work. This involves breaking down feedback into small, focused tasks or goals that align with their current level of skill and understanding. For instance, rather than broadly stating, "Improve your storytelling," a more actionable feedback would be, "Try adding more descriptive details to your main character to make them more relatable."
One should also remember to avoid phrases like, “You always get this wrong”, or “You never do this right.” Instead use phrases like, “You got this wrong in this case. Now that you know this you can get this right next time.” As parents and teachers, it is essential to give them agency and let them know that they can get better at it. Remember to focus on specific aspects of their writing, highlighting both strengths and areas for improvement. Even if the student hasn’t gotten everything right this time, let them know the improvement they have made since the last time and praise them for their efforts.


In conclusion, feedback is a magical ingredient in the recipe of young writers' growth and development. By fostering a growth mindset, emphasizing the process, and encouraging peer feedback, we can create an environment where young writers thrive. Let’s help them embrace the magic of feedback and empower the next generation of storytellers to unleash their creativity and reach new heights.

Finding new ways to inspire kids to write and communicate effectively is one of my life’s work which is why I include many fun activities in our writing classes to inspire the next generation of thinkers. Want to learn more about our story writing classes? Check us out here.

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